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A standard poodle or ‘caniche royal’. Poodles are well-known for their intelligence, but the hero of Nora Alleyne’s story seems to have scaled the heights of sagacity. Learning to roll in the mud so he could drive clients to his shoe-shining master is one thing, but getting from London to Paris in 1815, a year torn apart by European war, is quite another. He could not even do as a dog described by Jane Loudon did, and nonchalantly board a likely train: passenger railways would not be invented for another ten years. See Two Day Rovers, and The Stockton and Darlington Railway.

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A standard poodle or ‘caniche royal’. Poodles are well-known for their intelligence, but the hero of Nora Alleyne’s story seems to have scaled the heights of sagacity. Learning to roll in the mud so he could drive clients to his shoe-shining master is one thing, but getting from London to Paris in 1815, a year torn apart by European war, is quite another. He could not even do as a dog described by Jane Loudon did, and nonchalantly board a likely train: passenger railways would not be invented for another ten years. See Two Day Rovers, and The Stockton and Darlington Railway.

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The officer was so delighted with the poodle’s cleverness, that he went at once to the shoe-black, who confessed that the dog was his and that he had taught him this trick for the good of trade. The officer then proposed to buy the dog, and offered the shoe-black such a large sum that he agreed to part with his ‘bread-winner’. So the officer, who was returning at once to England, carried the dog, by coach and steamer to London, where he tied him up for some time, in order that he should forget all about his old life, and be ready to make himself happy in the new one.

When he was set free, however, the poodle seemed restless and ill at ease, and after two or three days he disappeared entirely. What he did then, nobody knows, but a fortnight after he had left the London house, he was found, steadily plying his old trade, on the Pont Henri Quatre.*

From ‘The Animal Story Book’ (1914) edited by Andrew Lang (1844-1912). The text is by his wife, Leonora ‘Nora’ Blanche Alleyne (1851-1933).

* The Pont Royal over the River Seine in Paris.

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Based on The English Critic (1939) by NL Clay, drawing on The New Criticism: A Lecture Delivered at Columbia University, March 9, 1910, by J. E. Spingarn, Professor of Comparative Literature in Columbia University, USA.

Précis

It turned out that the shoe-black had taught the poodle to do this as a way of drumming up trade, which tickled the Englishman so much that he bought the dog and took him home to London. At the first opportunity, however, the dog bolted, and two weeks later he was spotted in Paris, up to his old tricks. (59 / 60 words)

It turned out that the shoe-black had taught the poodle to do this as a way of drumming up trade, which tickled the Englishman so much that he bought the dog and took him home to London. At the first opportunity, however, the dog bolted, and two weeks later he was spotted in Paris, up to his old tricks.

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