Introduction
In the Spring of 1535, French explorer Jacques Cartier sailed up the St Lawrence River (so he named it) to Stadacona, near what would soon after become Quebec, and then further upriver to Hochelaga, which he named Montreal. Everything went well until winter came, for which the French were hopelessly unprepared.
Donnacona, the great chief of the Indians* at Stadacona, and some of his people went out in canoes to find whether the white men, or ‘pale-faces’ as they called them, had come for peace or war. Upon learning that it was a peaceful visit, Donnacona kissed Cartier’s hand and put it around his own neck, while the Indians waded out into the water shouting and singing. This was their way of giving a hearty Indian welcome.
After this Cartier went up the river to Hochelaga, another Indian village, at the foot of a beautiful mountain, which he named Mount Royal. From that we get the word Montreal, the name of our city which now stands where then stood the Indian village of Hochelaga. Here he had another Indian welcome. These people even thought him some divine being, and brought him an invalid chief to heal.
Cartier did not know what to do, but as he wanted to please the Indians he touched the chief and said a prayer. Then all the sick and lame from the village came to him, and he had to touch them and say more prayers.
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In the Spring of 1535, French adventurer Jacques Cartier sailed up the St Lawrence to an native Canadian settlement named Stadacona. The Indians (as he called them) gave him a warm and generous welcome, and even asked him to bless a sick chief. He also paid a visit to Hochelaga, a tall mountain he dubbed Mont Real.
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In the Spring of 1535, French adventurer Jacques Cartier sailed up the St Lawrence to an native Canadian settlement named Stadacona. The Indians (as he called them) gave him a warm and generous welcome, and even asked him to bless a sick chief. He also paid a visit to Hochelaga, a tall mountain he dubbed Mont Real.
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