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The Music of Silence

In Coleridge’s epic poem, the Ancient Mariner, amid the horrors of a ship of dead men, sees a sight both beautiful and surreal.

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The Music of Silence

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The rigging of a sailing ship is silhouetted against the night sky of Alaska, USA.

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Introduction

The Ancient Mariner has wantonly killed an albatross, and brought death and destruction on his ship. Surrounded now by the dead bodies of the crew, a new and ghostly sight meets his eyes.

EACH corse lay flat, lifeless and flat,
And, by the holy rood!
A man all light, a seraph-man,
On every corse there stood.

This seraph-band, each waved his hand:
It was a heavenly sight!
They stood as signals to the land,
Each one a lovely light;

This seraph-band, each waved his hand,
No voice did they impart—
No voice; but O, the silence sank
Like music on my heart.

From The Rime of the Ancient Mariner, by Samuel Taylor Coleridge (1772-1834).

Précis

Coleridge’s ancient Mariner sees angels or spirits rise on the dead bodies of the ship’s crew. The vision is eerie, but it is nevertheless beautiful. The spirits do not fill him with terror: their wordless salute moves him deeply, as if it had been heavenly music. (46 / 60 words)

Coleridge’s ancient Mariner sees angels or spirits rise on the dead bodies of the ship’s crew. The vision is eerie, but it is nevertheless beautiful. The spirits do not fill him with terror: their wordless salute moves him deeply, as if it had been heavenly music.

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Variations: 1.increase the length of this precis to exactly 50 words. 2.reduce the length of this precis to exactly 40 words. 3.introduce one of the following words into the precis: about, although, despite, must, since, until, whether, who.

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For each group of words, compose a sentence that uses all three. You can use any form of the word: for example, cat → cats, go → went, or quick → quickly, though neigh → neighbour is stretching it a bit.

This exercise uses words found in the accompanying passage.

1 Each. Heaven. Lovely.

2 Lie. Stand. There.

3 Do. Hand. Sight.

Variations: 1. include direct and indirect speech 2. include one or more of these words: although, because, despite, either/or, if, unless, until, when, whether, which, who 3. use negatives (not, isn’t, neither/nor, never, nobody etc.)

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Each of the words below has more than one possible meaning. Compose your own sentences to show what those different meanings are.

This exercise uses words found in the accompanying passage.

1. Lie. 2. Stand. 3. Man. 4. Mine. 5. Flat. 6. Sink. 7. Light. 8. Like.

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For each word above, choose one or more suitable meanings from this list.

1. Find pleasure in, approve. 2. Hold oneself upright on one’s feet. 3. Bear, endure a hardship. 4. Provide the crew for. 5. Conditions of a golf ball. 6. Pit. 7. Tell untruths. 8. Level and smooth. 9. Complete, e.g. refusal, denial. 10. A stall in a market. 11. A board for stage scenery. 12. Invest money into a project. 13. Not heavy or serious. 14. Set flame to. 15. Belonging to me. 16. Pay for e.g. drinks, food, on behalf of others. 17. Not dark. 18. A shoe without heels. 19. Wash-basin in a kitchen or laundry. 20. Descend deeper into water. 21. An apartment in a building. 22. Stretch out. 23. An island in the Irish Sea. 24. A male person. 25. Similar to.

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In each group below, you will find words that are similar to one another, but not exactly the same. Compose your own sentences to bring out the similarities and differences between them, whether in meaning, grammar or use.

This exercise uses words found in the accompanying passage.

1. Lamp. Light. 2. Light. Alight. 3. My. Mine. 4. Ones. One’s. 5. Pit. Mine. 6. There. Their. 7. Torch. Light. 8. Wave. Waive. 9. Were. We’re.

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