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Practice Makes Perfect

Making friends is, like playing music, not just a matter of natural talent.

By Jane Austen (1775-1817)
1813

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Practice Makes Perfect

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A Bechstein piano in an alcove in Samlesbury Hall, which lies between Preston and Blackburn in Lancashire. Now maintained by a trust, the 14th century hall has been a school and a pub, though to the early 1600s it was the family home of Gilbert de Southworth and his descendants.

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A Bechstein piano in an alcove in Samlesbury Hall, which lies between Preston and Blackburn in Lancashire. Now maintained by a trust, the 14th century hall has been a school and a pub, though to the early 1600s it was the family home of Gilbert de Southworth and his descendants.

Introduction

Elizabeth Bennet and Colonel Fitzwilliam have been teasing the Colonel’s cousin, Mr Darcy, about his stiff and awkward behaviour in company. Mr Darcy claims he cannot help it, but Elizabeth is having none of that.

“I CERTAINLY have not the talent which some people possess,” said Darcy, “of conversing easily with those I have never seen before. I cannot catch their tone of conversation, or appear interested in their concerns, as I often see done.”

“My fingers,” said Elizabeth, “do not move over this instrument in the masterly manner which I see so many women’s do. They have not the same force or rapidity, and do not produce the same expression. But then I have always supposed it to be my own fault — because I will not take the trouble of practising. It is not that I do not believe my fingers as capable as any other woman’s of superior execution.”

Darcy smiled and said, “You are perfectly right. You have employed your time much better. No one admitted to the privilege of hearing you can think anything wanting. We neither of us perform to strangers.”

By Jane Austen (1775-1817)

From Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen (1775-1817).

Questions for Critics

1. What is the author aiming to achieve in writing this?

2. Note any words, devices or turns of phrase that strike you. How do they help the author communicate her ideas more effectively?

3. What impression does this passage make on you? How might you put that impression into words?

Based on The English Critic (1939) by NL Clay, drawing on The New Criticism: A Lecture Delivered at Columbia University, March 9, 1910, by J. E. Spingarn, Professor of Comparative Literature in Columbia University, USA.

Précis

Mr Darcy excused his haughty manner in company as a natural lack of social skill. Elizabeth Bennet, however, seated at the piano, reminded him that just as practice largely makes up for a lack of natural talent in music, so too good social graces can be acquired by anyone willing to take the trouble. (54 / 60 words)

Mr Darcy excused his haughty manner in company as a natural lack of social skill. Elizabeth Bennet, however, seated at the piano, reminded him that just as practice largely makes up for a lack of natural talent in music, so too good social graces can be acquired by anyone willing to take the trouble.

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Variations: 1.increase the length of this precis to exactly 60 words. 2.reduce the length of this precis to exactly 50 words. 3.introduce one of the following words into the precis: because, if, may, must, ought, whereas, whether, who.

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Sevens Based on this passage

Suggest answers to this question. See if you can limit one answer to exactly seven words.

What excuse does Darcy plead for his brusque manner in company?

Variations: 1.expand your answer to exactly fourteen words. 2.expand your answer further, to exactly twenty-one words. 3.include one of the following words in your answer: if, but, despite, because, (al)though, unless.

Jigsaws Based on this passage

Express the ideas below in a single sentence, using different words as much as possible. Do not be satisfied with the first answer you think of; think of several, and choose the best.

Mr Darcy appeared haughty. He claimed he could not make small-talk.

Spinners Find in Think and Speak

For each group of words, compose a sentence that uses all three. You can use any form of the word: for example, cat → cats, go → went, or quick → quickly, though neigh → neighbour is stretching it a bit.

This exercise uses words found in the accompanying passage.

1 Better. Produce. You.

2 Before. Finger. Time.

3 Execution. Many. Own.

Variations: 1. include direct and indirect speech 2. include one or more of these words: although, because, despite, either/or, if, unless, until, when, whether, which, who 3. use negatives (not, isn’t, neither/nor, never, nobody etc.)

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Make words (three letters or more) from the seven letters showing below, using any letter once only. Each letter carries a score. What is the highest-scoring word you can make?

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