The Copy Book

‘A City Greater than London’

Part 2 of 2

Show Photo

By an anonymous Indian artist of the seventeenth century, via Wikimedia Commons. Licence: Public domain.

More Info

Back to text

‘A City Greater than London’

By an anonymous Indian artist of the seventeenth century, via Wikimedia Commons. Licence: Public domain. Source
X

A seventeenth-century drawing by an unknown Indian artist of Akbar the Great, in his red cap and kaba fastened down one side, receiving visiting dignitaries with their wares. A gentleman in Elizabethan habit can be seen waiting his turn; on the left is a Roman Catholic priest, perhaps one of the Portuguese Jesuits from Goa who often attended the Mughal court and sought to convert him: vainly as it proved, since Akbar detested religious intolerance and this was after all the age of the Inquisition. Akbar’s servant holds one of the hawks the Emperor used for hunting, just one exhibit from the vast menagerie of elephants, deer, birds of prey and big cats that so impressed Fitch. Some hopefuls carry books: Akbar was dyslexic and could not read, but loved to hear his servants read to him.

Back to text

Continued from Part 1

THEY have many fine carts — and many of them carved and gilded with gold — with two wheels, which be drawn with two little Bulls about the bigness of our great dogs in England,* and they will run with any horse and carry two or three men in one of these carts; they are covered with silk or very fine cloth, and be used here as our coaches be in England.

Hither is great resort of merchants from Persia and out of India, and very much merchandise of silk and cloth and of precious stones, both Rubies, Diamonds and Pearls. The King is apparelled in a white Cabie* made like a shirt, tied with strings on the one side, and a little cloth on his head coloured oftentimes with red or yellow. None come into his house but his eunuchs, which keep his women.

I left William Leedes,* the jeweller, in service with the king, Zelabdim Echebar, in Fatepore, who did entertain him very well and gave him an house and five slaves, an horse and every day six shillings in money.*

Abridged

Abridged from the account of Ralph Fitch (1550-1611) as reprinted in ‘The First Englishmen in India’ (1930), edited by J. Courtenay Locke.

* The largest English dog breed is said to be the English mastiff.

* “The long muslin tunic still general in India” explains editor J. Courtenay Locke, writing in 1930. “It is the Portuguese cabaya, probably from the Arabic kaba, ‘a garment’.”

* The adventure was led by four Englishmen, the merchants Ralph Fitch and John Newbery, with jeweller William Leedes and artist James Story. As far as we know, neither Leedes nor Newbery, the latter last heard of setting out for Lahore, returned to England. (The brand of Indian tonic known as Fitch & Leedes is named in honour of Ralph Fitch and William Leedes.)

* Six shillings a day (there were twenty shillings to the English pound sterling) was a considerable sum of money. According to Jeffrey L. Forgeng in Daily Life in Elizabethan England (2010), a craftsman in Elizabethan England might expect only one shilling a day.

Précis

Merchants came to the two cities from across India and as far afield as Persia, trading in fine cloth and gemstones; indeed, Fitch’s friend William Leedes accepted a lucrative post as Akbar’s own jeweller. But Fitch’s eye was caught by the sumptuous carts rumbling about the city, drawn by little bulls, which reminded him strongly of carriages back home. (59 / 60 words)

Merchants came to the two cities from across India and as far afield as Persia, trading in fine cloth and gemstones; indeed, Fitch’s friend William Leedes accepted a lucrative post as Akbar’s own jeweller. But Fitch’s eye was caught by the sumptuous carts rumbling about the city, drawn by little bulls, which reminded him strongly of carriages back home.

Edit | Reset

Variations: 1.increase the length of this precis to exactly 65 words. 2.reduce the length of this precis to exactly 55 words. 3.introduce one of the following words into the precis: because, if, just, may, otherwise, since, until, whether.

Archive

Word Games

Spinners Find in Think and Speak

For each group of words, compose a sentence that uses all three. You can use any form of the word: for example, cat → cats, go → went, or quick → quickly, though neigh → neighbour is stretching it a bit.

This exercise uses words found in the accompanying passage.

1 Person. Street. Very.

2 All. Gild. Thence.

3 Big. Red. Service.

Variations: 1. include direct and indirect speech 2. include one or more of these words: although, because, despite, either/or, if, unless, until, when, whether, which, who 3. use negatives (not, isn’t, neither/nor, never, nobody etc.)

Statements, Questions and Commands Find in Think and Speak

Use each word below in a sentence. Try to include at least one statement, one question and one command among your sentences. Note that some verbs make awkward or meaningless words of command, e.g. need, happen.

This exercise uses words found in the accompanying passage.

1 Place. 2 Still. 3 Service. 4 Market. 5 Use. 6 Man. 7 Draw. 8 Dog. 9 Tie.

Variations: 1. use a minimum of seven words for each sentence 2. include negatives, e.g. isn’t, don’t, never 3. use the words ‘must’ to make commands 4. compose a short dialogue containing all three kinds of sentence: one statement, one question and one command

Subject and Object Find in Think and Speak

Use each word below in two sentences, first as the subject of a verb, and then as the object of a verb. It doesn’t have to be the same verb: some verbs can’t be paired with an object (e.g. arrive, happen), so watch out for these.

This exercise uses words found in the accompanying passage.

1. Market. 2. People. 3. Coach. 4. Great. 5. Call. 6. Run. 7. Tie. 8. Horse. 9. Use.

Variations: 1.use your noun in the plural (e.g. cat → cats), if possible. 2.give one of your sentences a future aspect (e.g. will, going to). 3.write sentences using negatives such as not, neither, nobody and never.

Add Vowels Find in Think and Speak

Make words by adding vowels to each group of consonants below. You may add as many vowels as you like before, between or after the consonants, but you may not add any consonants or change the order of those you have been given. See if you can beat our target of common words.

ldr (5+1)

See Words

alder. elder. leader. louder. older.

loader.

If you like what I’m doing here on Clay Lane, from time to time you could buy me a coffee.

Buy Me a Coffee is a crowdfunding website, used by over a million people. It is designed to help content creators like me make a living from their work. ‘Buy Me a Coffee’ prides itself on its security, and there is no need to register.

Related Posts

Seeds of Empire

The British Empire may be said to have started when Elizabethan importers got into a fight with the Dutch over the price of pepper.

Sing Us a Song of Zion

The Sultan of Aceh in northern Sumatra welcomed his guests from Christian England with an unexpected gesture of friendship.

Akbar Takes the Plunge

Emperor Akbar’s court physician told his nobles that beneath the waters of a lake was a dry, cosy room, and dared them to find a way in.

Press Agents

When Lord Salisbury asked the Russian Minister of the Interior how many agents the Tsar had in India, the reply came as a shock.