Introduction
In 1615, English courtier Sir Thomas Roe was despatched to the court of the Great Mogul, Jehangir, to win his support for the East India Company in the face of Portuguese rivals. Roe presented the Emperor with various presents designed to impress him with the superior cultural advancement of the English, but he might have been better off keeping it simple.
Adsmere, 25 January, 1615[-16].
By the 10th of January I recovered so much strength as to sit on a horse; and, having demanded leave, presented myself to the King. ... After many Compliments, I used some words to him, delivering his Majesty’s letter and showing my Commission, the Copy wherof (I meane the letter) I then also delivered in Persian; after that, your presents. He sitting in his state could not well discerne the Coach, but sent many to see it, and Caused the Musician to play on the Virginals there, which gave him good Content. ... At night, hee having stayed the Coachman and Musician, he came down into a Court, got into the Coach, into every Corner, and caused it to be drawn about by them. Then he sent to me, though 10 o’clock at night, for a servant to tie on his scarf and sword the English fashion, in which he took so great pride that he marched up and down, drawing it and flourishing, and since hath never been seen without it.
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In January 1616, Sir Thomas Roe presented Jehangir, the Mughal Emperor, with gifts from London. They included some live English music, a horse-drawn carriage, and a sword. The music failed to grip, but the coach was much better. Jehangir insisted on trying out the sword that same night, and was still wearing it a fortnight later.
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In January 1616, Sir Thomas Roe presented Jehangir, the Mughal Emperor, with gifts from London. They included some live English music, a horse-drawn carriage, and a sword. The music failed to grip, but the coach was much better. Jehangir insisted on trying out the sword that same night, and was still wearing it a fortnight later.
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