Introduction
Young Davy Copperfield never knew his father, who died before Davy was born. There came a time when his shy but pretty mother began staying out to dinners, and after one of them she was brought home by a raven-dark-haired gentleman, whom Davy recalled seeing the Sunday before.
AS my mother stooped down on the threshold to take me in her arms and kiss me, the gentleman said I was a more highly privileged little fellow than a monarch — or something like that; for my later understanding comes, I am sensible, to my aid here.
‘What does that mean?’ I asked him, over her shoulder.
He patted me on the head; but somehow, I didn’t like him or his deep voice, and I was jealous that his hand should touch my mother’s in touching me — which it did. I put it away, as well as I could.
‘Oh, Davy!’ remonstrated my mother.
‘Dear boy!’ said the gentleman. ‘I cannot wonder at his devotion!’
I never saw such a beautiful colour on my mother’s face before. She gently chid me for being rude; and, keeping me close to her shawl, turned to thank the gentleman for taking so much trouble as to bring her home.
Précis
After her husband died, Mrs Copperfield lavished all her affection on little Davy, her son; but there came a time when she returned home after a social engagement on the arm of Edward Murdstone. Even Davy noted her high spirits, but Edward’s proprietorial manner towards Davy’s mother gave offence, and the boy took a strong dislike to him. (58 / 60 words)
After her husband died, Mrs Copperfield lavished all her affection on little Davy, her son; but there came a time when she returned home after a social engagement on the arm of Edward Murdstone. Even Davy noted her high spirits, but Edward’s proprietorial manner towards Davy’s mother gave offence, and the boy took a strong dislike to him.
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