Corfe Castle in Dorset, a few miles west of Poole. The ruins visible today are largely 12th and 13th century, and the building dates back no earlier than the days of William the Conqueror r. 1066-1087), who liked to go hunting in the forest at Purbeck. The events recorded by Roger happened a century earlier, when Corfe was home to a now lost royal palace.
Introduction
Edward became King of England in 975, aged twelve. His stepmother Ælfthryth at once sidelined him, and sought to rule through her own boy Ethelred, barely eight. Edward’s party supported the revival of England’s monasteries whereas Ælfthryth campaigned to dissolve them, and in 978 his principles cost Edward his life. Roger of Wendover (?-1236) accused Ælfthryth of the murder, but there was a twist in the tale.
AS king Edward was one day [978] weary with hunting and very thirsty, leaving his attendants to follow the dogs, and hearing that his step-mother and his brother were living in a certain village named Corvesgate,* he rode thither unattended in quest of something to drink, in his innocence suspecting no harm, and judging of the hearts of others by his own. Seeing him coming, his step-mother allured him with her caresses, and kissing him offered him a cup, and as the king eagerly quaffed it, he was stabbed with a dagger by one of her attendants. The king, finding himself mortally wounded, set spurs to his horse to regain his friends, who learnt his death by the track of the blood.
The wicked woman Ælfthryth and her son Ethelred* ordered the corpse of the king and martyr St Edward to be ignominiously buried at Wareham in the midst of public rejoicing and festivity, as if they had buried his memory and his body together. But divine pity came to his aid, and ennobled the innocent victim with the grace of miracles.
* This was a royal residence on the site of what is now Corfe Castle: the current (ruinous) building dates back mainly to the 12th and 13th centuries, and no earlier than the the time of William the Conquerer (r. 1066-1087). The castle overlooks the village of Corfe in Dorset, a short distance west of Poole.
* He was later known as Ethelred the Unready, meaning ‘lack-counsel’, because of what was perceived as his dithering over the threat posed by the large Scandinavian community in England, and that posed also by Swein Forkbeard, King Denmark, and his son Cnut (Canute).
* Wareham is a pretty Dorsetshire town at the conjunction of the rivers Frome and Piddle, about five miles northwest of Corfe.
Précis
Taking a break in hunting one day in 975, young King Edward called in at the palace in Corfe hoping for a drink. As he drank, one of his stepmother Æalfthryth’s servants knifed him to death. Amid much jubilation at court, Edward was buried casually at Wareham, and preparations began to place his stepbrother Ethelred on the throne. (58 / 60 words)
Taking a break in hunting one day in 975, young King Edward called in at the palace in Corfe hoping for a drink. As he drank, one of his stepmother Æalfthryth’s servants knifed him to death. Amid much jubilation at court, Edward was buried casually at Wareham, and preparations began to place his stepbrother Ethelred on the throne.
Variations: 1.increase the length of this precis to exactly 65 words. 2.reduce the length of this precis to exactly 55 words. 3.introduce one of the following words into the precis: because, besides, may, must, not, or, ought, whereas.
Word Games
Jigsaws Based on this passage
Express the ideas below in a single sentence, using different words as much as possible. Do not be satisfied with the first answer you think of; think of several, and choose the best.
Post Box : Ask Nicholas
Grok : Ask Grok
You are welcome to share your creativity with me, or ask for help with any of the exercises on Clay Lane. Write to me at this address:
See more at Post Box.
If you like what I’m doing here on Clay Lane, from time to time you could buy me a coffee.
Buy Me a Coffee is a crowdfunding website, used by over a million people. It is designed to help content creators like me make a living from their work. ‘Buy Me a Coffee’ prides itself on its security, and there is no need to register.