Introduction
Pip Pirrip has finally met the anonymous benefactor who made him a gentleman – a transported felon, Abel Magwitch, illegally back in Britain just to see him. But shock and disgust have given way to pity and respect; and now Abel lies in a prison hospital, unlikely to trouble the hangman, Pip never misses a minute of visiting hour.
“DEAR boy,” he said, as I sat down by his bed: “I thought you was late. But I knowed you couldn’t be that. God bless you! You’ve never deserted me, dear boy.”
I pressed his hand in silence, for I could not forget that I had once meant to desert him.
“And what’s the best of all,” he said, “you’ve been more comfortable alonger me, since I was under a dark cloud, than when the sun shone. That’s best of all.”
He lay on his back, breathing with great difficulty. Do what he would, and love me though he did, the light left his face ever and again, and a film came over the placid look at the white ceiling.
“Are you in much pain to-day?”
“I don’t complain of none, dear boy.”
“You never do complain.”
He had spoken his last words. He smiled, and I understood his touch to mean that he wished to lift my hand, and lay it on his breast. I laid it there, and he smiled again, and put both his hands upon it.
Précis
Abel Magwitch’s gratitude to Pip Pirrip for visiting him in hospital makes Pip a little ashamed; he does not feel he deserves it. But if Pip was once less than gracious towards Magwitch, now he appreciates his friendship, making a point of never being late for visiting time, and bringing as much comfort as he can to the dying man. (60 / 60 words)
Abel Magwitch’s gratitude to Pip Pirrip for visiting him in hospital makes Pip a little ashamed; he does not feel he deserves it. But if Pip was once less than gracious towards Magwitch, now he appreciates his friendship, making a point of never being late for visiting time, and bringing as much comfort as he can to the dying man.
Variations: 1.increase the length of this precis to exactly 65 words. 2.reduce the length of this precis to exactly 55 words. 3.introduce one of the following words into the precis: about, although, because, just, must, or, until, whereas.
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Variations: 1.expand your answer to exactly fourteen words. 2.expand your answer further, to exactly twenty-one words. 3.include one of the following words in your answer: if, but, despite, because, (al)though, unless.
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