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Introduction
At dawn on Sunday 15th September, 1805, Admiral Horatio Lord Nelson gave the order for his flagship HMS Victory to weigh anchor. Never had Nelson’s duty to go to sea been greater; never had his reasons to stay ashore been stronger. His diary recorded his feelings on the previous Friday night, as his chaise rattled towards towards Portsmouth, and again in the moments before the Battle of Trafalgar.
FRIDAY Night at half-past Ten drove from dear, dear Merton, where I left all which I hold dear in this World,* to go to serve my King & Country. May the Great God Whom I adore enable me to fullfill the expectations of my Country, and if it is His good pleasure that I should return, my thanks will never cease being offered up to the Throne of His Mercy. If it is His good providence to cut short my days upon Earth, I bow with the greatest submission,* relying that He will protect those so dear to me that I may leave behind.*
His Will be done. Amen. Amen. Amen.
* Chief among these ties were his mistress Emma, Lady Hamilton, and their daughter Horatia. “The last minutes which Nelson passed at Merton” Robert Southey tells us “were employed in praying over this child as she lay sleeping.” On October 21st, as the Battle of Trafalgar loomed, Nelson wrote to Horatia, then aged four. “You are ever uppermost in my thoughts” he reassured her, calling her ‘my dearest angel.’ “I shall be sure of your prayers for my safety, conquest and speedy return to dear Merton.”
* Nelson’s attitude to the risks of his profession had changed over the years. In 1782 he told his father that “I got my rank by a shot killing a post-captain, and I most sincerely hope I shall, when I go, go out of [the] world the same way.” By 1801, frustrated at Admiralty policy, he was dreaming of retiring to a farm. His long absences at sea — “I went on shore” he noted on July 20th, 1805 “for the first time since the 16th of June, 1803” — were a growing trial to him, but even more so to Emma, who had little to distract her but unwanted offers of marriage.
* Nelson provided generously for his estranged wife Frances and for other members of his family in his Will. There was also provision for Emma and Horatia, but tact decreed that it must be modest. Shortly before the Battle of Trafalgar, Nelson wrote a Codicil (duly proved) in which he suggested that as she had run several diplomatic errands for the Navy, Emma deserved a civil list pension. As a way to observe the proprieties it was a happy inspiration, but Parliament did not take the hint. They did however find plenty of taxpayers’ money to award to Nelson’s already wealthy relations.
Précis
On September 13, 1805, Horatio Nelson was obliged to leave his mistress Emma Hamilton and their daughter Horatia at home in Merton, and rejoin HMS Victory in Portsmouth. The parting was hard to bear, and he prayed fervently that God would bring him safely home, or if that were not his will, then take care of those he left behind. (60 / 60 words)
On September 13, 1805, Horatio Nelson was obliged to leave his mistress Emma Hamilton and their daughter Horatia at home in Merton, and rejoin HMS Victory in Portsmouth. The parting was hard to bear, and he prayed fervently that God would bring him safely home, or if that were not his will, then take care of those he left behind.
Variations: 1.increase the length of this precis to exactly 65 words. 2.reduce the length of this precis to exactly 55 words. 3.introduce one of the following words into the precis: about, besides, must, ought, until, whereas, whether, who.
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