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When the Cat’s Away...

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When the Cat’s Away...

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Starlings squabbling over a bird-feeder near Bury in Lancashire.

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In the autumn I bought some filberts,* and put them into a closet upstairs, went to London, returned, and thought I would sleep in the room adjoining the closet. No such thing. As soon as the light was out there was a sound of gnawing — curb—curb—sweek!—squeak — a rushing of tiny feet here, there, and everywhere; thump, bump—scriggle, scraggle—squeak — overhead, above the ceiling, behind the skirting boards, under the floor, and — in the closet.

I lighted a candle, opened the door, and looked into the repository for my filberts. What a hustling, what a scuffling, what a scrambling. There they were, mice in numbers; they “made for” some holes in the corners of the cupboard, got jammed, squeaked, struggled, squabbled, pushed, their tails making circles; push—push—squeak! — more jostling, another effort or two — squeak—squeak—gurgle—squeak — more struggling — and they were gone. Gone? Yes! but not for long. As soon as the light was out back they came.

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* Another word for hazelnuts.

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The problem came to a head that autumn, when Weir stashed some hazelnuts in a bedroom closet. The mice got into the closet and made such a maddening noise with their squeaks and squabbles that he could not sleep. The noise abated briefly when he went to investigate, but as soon as the light was out it started again. (59 / 60 words)

The problem came to a head that autumn, when Weir stashed some hazelnuts in a bedroom closet. The mice got into the closet and made such a maddening noise with their squeaks and squabbles that he could not sleep. The noise abated briefly when he went to investigate, but as soon as the light was out it started again.

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