1 October 28
The first of these was given to students in Clay’s Exercises 12-13 (1933); the others are mine. Choose one of the following and describe it, introducing people and action.
1 A waiting room.
2 A lift.
3 A cricket pavilion.
4 A shop at an airport.
5 A stables.
Try to make sure your scene helps the reader to answer six questions: What? Who? Where? When (e.g. in the day, or in history)? How? Why? But remember: Show, don’t tell!
2 August 30
This is adapted from an idea in Think and Speak (1929). It is an exercise not just in composition or description but also in visualisation. Choose a phrase below and expand it into a lively scene of at least one sentence. Including people or animals is a good way to impart interest and movement.
1 Van in street.
2 Bird feeder.
3 Kettle.
Try to make sure your scene helps the reader answer six questions: What? Who? Where? When (e.g. in the day, or in history)? How? Why? But remember: Show, don’t tell!
See Rudyard Kipling’s poem Six Honest Serving-Men.