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Part 1
Seeing that he must proceed to extremities, he put her into the coal-hole, and held the door closed, with a trembling sense that he was using a strong measure.
For a moment there was silence, but then came a little cry, “Opy, opy!” and Silas let her out again, saying “Now Eppie will never be naughty again, else she must go in the coal-hole — a black naughty place.”
The weaving must stand still a long while this morning, for now Eppie must be washed, and have clean clothes on; but it was to be hoped that this punishment would have a lasting effect, and save time in future — though, perhaps, it would have been better if Eppie had cried more.
In half an hour she was clean again, and Silas having turned his back to see what he could do with the linen band, threw it down again, with the reflection that Eppie would be good without fastening for the rest of the morning. He turned round again, and was going to place her in her little chair near the loom, when she peeped out at him with black face and hands again, and said, “Eppie in de toal-hole!”
By
George Eliot
1819-1880
From ‘Silas Marner’ (1861), by George Eliot (1819-1880). George Eliot was the pen-name of Mary Ann Evans.
Questions for Critics
1. What is the author
aiming to achieve in writing this?
2. Note any words, devices or turns of phrase that
strike you. How do they help the author communicate her
ideas more effectively?
3. What impression does this passage make on you?
How might you put that impression into words?
Based on The English Critic (1939)
by NL Clay, drawing on The New Criticism: A Lecture Delivered at
Columbia University, March 9, 1910, by J. E. Spingarn,
Professor of Comparative Literature in Columbia University,
USA.
Précis
Eppie is duly eased into the coal-hole, and hardening his heart Silas even manages to shut the door for a moment. Satisfied that the horrors of the dark have cured her, he ponders whether to reattach her harness — only to turn round and find Eppie covered in smuts, gleefully announcing that she has revisited ‘de toal-hole’ all by herself.
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Eppie is duly eased into the coal-hole, and hardening his heart Silas even manages to shut the door for a moment. Satisfied that the horrors of the dark have cured her, he ponders whether to reattach her harness — only to turn round and find Eppie covered in smuts, gleefully announcing that she has revisited ‘de toal-hole’ all by herself.
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Into.
Must.
Should.
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Measure.
She.
Throw.
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Determine.
First.
Joy.
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robe.
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